Talk:Beau’s Beer Dec 6 2011: Difference between revisions
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--[[User:MattBelanger|MattBelanger]] 14:54, 5 December 2011 (EST) | --[[User:MattBelanger|MattBelanger]] 14:54, 5 December 2011 (EST) | ||
I like the first sentence, but kill the reference to revenue. Also, the word "unseemly" is awkward.--[[User:JNMcLarty|JNMcLarty]] 15:12, 5 December 2011 (EST) | I like the first sentence proposed for the ending, but kill the reference to revenue. Also, the word "unseemly" is awkward.--[[User:JNMcLarty|JNMcLarty]] 15:12, 5 December 2011 (EST) | ||
Side note - For future, the title of the wiki page created for the purposes should be "Beau's Beer - Dec 08 2011" Wiki page titles need to stay unique. So - if we ever want to release another press release title "Beau's Beer", our system won't compute. --[[User:JNMcLarty|JNMcLarty]] 15:12, 5 December 2011 (EST) | Side note - For future, the title of the wiki page created for the purposes should be "Beau's Beer - Dec 08 2011" Wiki page titles need to stay unique. So - if we ever want to release another press release title "Beau's Beer", our system won't compute. --[[User:JNMcLarty|JNMcLarty]] 15:12, 5 December 2011 (EST) | ||
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I would make the final sentence "As the Party of Choice, the Ontario Libertarian Party would completely remove the Ontario government from liquor sales, and open the market fully to competition"
--MattBelanger 14:54, 5 December 2011 (EST)
I like the first sentence proposed for the ending, but kill the reference to revenue. Also, the word "unseemly" is awkward.--JNMcLarty 15:12, 5 December 2011 (EST)
Side note - For future, the title of the wiki page created for the purposes should be "Beau's Beer - Dec 08 2011" Wiki page titles need to stay unique. So - if we ever want to release another press release title "Beau's Beer", our system won't compute. --JNMcLarty 15:12, 5 December 2011 (EST)