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==Initial Thoughts== | |||
I would make the final sentence "As the Party of Choice, the Ontario Libertarian Party would completely remove the Ontario government from liquor sales, and open the market fully to competition" | I would make the final sentence "As the Party of Choice, the Ontario Libertarian Party would completely remove the Ontario government from liquor sales, and open the market fully to competition" | ||
--[[User:MattBelanger|MattBelanger]] 14:54, 5 December 2011 (EST) | --[[User:MattBelanger|MattBelanger]] 14:54, 5 December 2011 (EST) | ||
*I like the first sentence proposed for the ending, but kill the reference to revenue. Also, the word "unseemly" is awkward.--[[User:JNMcLarty|JNMcLarty]] 15:12, 5 December 2011 (EST) | |||
*Side note - For future, the title of the wiki page created for the purposes should be "Beau's Beer - Dec 08 2011" Wiki page titles need to stay unique. So - if we ever want to release another press release title "Beau's Beer", our system won't compute. --[[User:JNMcLarty|JNMcLarty]] 15:12, 5 December 2011 (EST) | |||
*There is two ways to go here - people can just make the mark-ups they want directly, or the originator, can voluntarily make the changes. Allen, over to you. Your call.--[[User:JNMcLarty|JNMcLarty]] 15:19, 5 December 2011 (EST) | |||
*I like Matt's ending. --[[User:LibertarianCFO|LibertarianCFO]] 15:33, 5 December 2011 (EST) | |||
==Release Timing== | |||
*When is this to be released?--[[User:JNMcLarty|JNMcLarty]] 15:36, 5 December 2011 (EST) | |||
**I found the thread on the OLP yahoo groups: ''"I will send this out at 2:30 pm Tuesday Dec. 6." - Allen ''--[[User:JNMcLarty|JNMcLarty]] 15:43, 5 December 2011 (EST) | |||
Thanks, Jeff, I'm learning. | |||
Latest revision as of 23:35, 17 January 2021
Initial Thoughts[edit]
I would make the final sentence "As the Party of Choice, the Ontario Libertarian Party would completely remove the Ontario government from liquor sales, and open the market fully to competition"
--MattBelanger 14:54, 5 December 2011 (EST)
- I like the first sentence proposed for the ending, but kill the reference to revenue. Also, the word "unseemly" is awkward.--JNMcLarty 15:12, 5 December 2011 (EST)
- Side note - For future, the title of the wiki page created for the purposes should be "Beau's Beer - Dec 08 2011" Wiki page titles need to stay unique. So - if we ever want to release another press release title "Beau's Beer", our system won't compute. --JNMcLarty 15:12, 5 December 2011 (EST)
- There is two ways to go here - people can just make the mark-ups they want directly, or the originator, can voluntarily make the changes. Allen, over to you. Your call.--JNMcLarty 15:19, 5 December 2011 (EST)
- I like Matt's ending. --LibertarianCFO 15:33, 5 December 2011 (EST)
Release Timing[edit]
- When is this to be released?--JNMcLarty 15:36, 5 December 2011 (EST)
- I found the thread on the OLP yahoo groups: "I will send this out at 2:30 pm Tuesday Dec. 6." - Allen --JNMcLarty 15:43, 5 December 2011 (EST)
Thanks, Jeff, I'm learning.