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It took me a few minutes to figure out that "Smarter & Inspiring" in the black bar was describing "Education" below it in the green bar. They appear to be completely separate at first glance. Is there some way to make it more obvious that the adjectives are tied to the subject? The same goes for the "more choice" and "more quality" descriptors. It isn't obvious that all the stuff about Education or Taxation, etc. goes together. --[[User:LibertarianCFO|Jim McIntosh]] 20:11, 13 September 2012 (EDT) | It took me a few minutes to figure out that "Smarter & Inspiring" in the black bar was describing "Education" below it in the green bar. They appear to be completely separate at first glance. Is there some way to make it more obvious that the adjectives are tied to the subject? The same goes for the "more choice" and "more quality" descriptors. It isn't obvious that all the stuff about Education or Taxation, etc. goes together. --[[User:LibertarianCFO|Jim McIntosh]] 20:11, 13 September 2012 (EDT) | ||
Ok, either Alex or I will incorporate into the next revision.--[[User:JNMcLarty|Jeffrey McLarty]] 20:22, 13 September 2012 (EDT) | |||
I don't think people will understand "'''Directed-Tax Choice''' for Public Schools." I don't. And is it just for Public Schools, and not private schools? --[[User:LibertarianCFO|Jim McIntosh]] 20:11, 13 September 2012 (EDT) | I don't think people will understand "'''Directed-Tax Choice''' for Public Schools." I don't. And is it just for Public Schools, and not private schools? --[[User:LibertarianCFO|Jim McIntosh]] 20:11, 13 September 2012 (EDT) | ||
I've searched far and wide for a clever wording. Sometimes you have to call a spade a spade. Some people say "Voucher System." sounds "too American". I'm open to suggestions...--[[User:JNMcLarty|Jeffrey McLarty]] 20:22, 13 September 2012 (EDT) | |||
Revision as of 00:22, 14 September 2012
Now that we have a little time -
"Hear our way" should be on one line, all same size font. --Jim McIntosh 20:11, 13 September 2012 (EDT)
It took me a few minutes to figure out that "Smarter & Inspiring" in the black bar was describing "Education" below it in the green bar. They appear to be completely separate at first glance. Is there some way to make it more obvious that the adjectives are tied to the subject? The same goes for the "more choice" and "more quality" descriptors. It isn't obvious that all the stuff about Education or Taxation, etc. goes together. --Jim McIntosh 20:11, 13 September 2012 (EDT) Ok, either Alex or I will incorporate into the next revision.--Jeffrey McLarty 20:22, 13 September 2012 (EDT)
I don't think people will understand "Directed-Tax Choice for Public Schools." I don't. And is it just for Public Schools, and not private schools? --Jim McIntosh 20:11, 13 September 2012 (EDT)
I've searched far and wide for a clever wording. Sometimes you have to call a spade a spade. Some people say "Voucher System." sounds "too American". I'm open to suggestions...--Jeffrey McLarty 20:22, 13 September 2012 (EDT)