Talk:Platform 2013-2014

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Healthcare

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"... a centrally planned monopoly that tramples new ideas and competition, ...". How about "... a centrally planned monopoly that inhibits new ideas and forbids competition ...". --Jim McIntosh 14:31, 19 January 2013 (EST)

You single handedly identified, THE MOST debated single word, in that entire document.--Jeffrey McLarty 14:42, 19 January 2013 (EST)

I agree "...that inhibits "innovative" ideas and forbids competition..." would be a more appropriate terminology. --Neal 16:52, 19 January 2013 (EST) I like Jim's wording. --Allen Small 21:35, 19 January 2013 (EST)

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Education

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Energy

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Jobs

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